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there is tatoo on his arm
that is interesting, my friend had visited the Englang last summer, and after he went back, he made a tatoo with the map of the Manchester. it is truth.
its like google maps , there is a big title "Manchester" and web of roads on his arm.

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- there is tatoo on his arm
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- that is interesting, my friend had visited the Englang last summer, and after he went back, he made a tatoo with the map of the Manchester. it is truth.
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 1
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- its like google maps , there is a big title "Manchester" and web of roads on his arm.
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 2