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Text from ElyD84 - English

  • I introduce myself

  • Hi to all!
  • My name is Elisa.
  • I'm 32 years old. I'm Italian.
  • I was born and grew up here.
  • I have an older sister and an older brother.
  • I am the youngest of three sons.
  • Since childhood I love very much nature and animals.
  • I could never live among asphalt and concrete.
  • I have need to meadows, hills, mountains, sea, rivers, trees, flowers, animals....
  • I love life in all its forms and I try to respect it as much as possible.
  • I love every seasons, but my favourite is the spring.
  • The season of rebirth and of love, but every season has its charms.
  • For me the animals are brothers.
  • There is not distinction: we are all living creatures. Life is life.
  • There is not one more important than another.
  • But respect the ideas of others.
  • I think we are all here to make a path and each one will come to their knowledge in due time.
  • I'm a very sensitive and emotional person.
  • Introverted and lonely, but I also like stay in the company, laughing and joking.
  • I'm very close to my family despite discussions and misunderstandings.
  • I have for years a great desire to travel, see new places and meet new people, but courage is not one of my best qualities.
  • I hope to improve and decide one day.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English