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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities.

To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The rapid development of social economy have paved way for creating more and more opulent corporations.

Some people argue that businesses should take related responsibilities apart from making money.

I fully agree with this opinion.

First, a harmonious society is constituted with various components, each of which should shoulder some responsibilities and businesses are not an exception.

In addition, a sanguine environment resulted from taking responsibilities can in turn help create a positive and upbeat atmosphere contributing to better development of businesses.

For instance, the success of Alibaba mainly owes to appropriate economic policy at that time which encouraged small businesses to develop virtual economy leading to the formation of a new top corporation which repaid what it got from the society through establishing business schools to cultivate youngsters with innovative ideas and knowledge.

Second, it cannot be denied that making profits is the top priority for a company, but related obligations should not be neglected, which not only refrain entrepreneurs from committing commercial crimes like producing harmful goods but also offer an opportunity to present a good image to the public --- the best promotion tactic.

Third, the combination of responsibilities and profits boosts an all-round and long-term development of a certain company.

To conclude, on top of making money, businesses should also shoulder obligations to achieve an optimal result both for themselves and the whole society as well.