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  • A report

  • You have been studying in an English-speaking country for some time as part of an educational exchange.
  • The director of the exchange programme is interested in improving the experience for future students.
  • He has asked you to write a report outlining why you have being doing the exchange, what you like and dislike about it and making recommendations for how it could be improved.
  • Write your report.
  • Exchange programs, a way to open your mind Introduction This report is based on my experience as learner in Pegasus educational exchange programme.
  • For this purpose, I will mention my reasons for doing the exchange.
  • After that, I will talk about the positive and negative aspects of the experience.
  • Finally, I will propose my personal recommendations for improvement.
  • Why I decided to do the exchange?
  • It is widely accepted that the knowledge of several languages is reducing barriers and opening doors among citizens from different countries.
  • To get better job opportunities, in the future, was my main reason to participate in the program.
  • I wanted to improve my English.
  • What is more I was interested in opening my mind by interacting with students from different countries.
  • Aspects I like Speaking about what I like most, I have to mention I really enjoyed having traditional food in the house where I stayed.
  • Besides, the groups in the classes were not too big so we were able to profit from all the lessons.
  • What is more, the groups mixed students from different countries, so it was easier for me to know about the way of life in other countries.
  • Aspects I dislike However, I was not agreed at all with the fact that I had to share my room with other learners.
  • We were three and in spite of having a good relationship, we rarely had discussions and so on…I missed my space and my intimacy.
  • Apart from that, the lessons were too long for me; It was an intensive course, eight hours every day…At the end of the day, my head was full of information.
  • Finally, I should mention the bad quality of the internet connection.
  • Conclusion From the information provided in this report, it is clear that I am really happy with the exchange programme in general but it is worthy to make some changes such as: the number of students in every bedroom, the last of the lessons and revise the internet connection.

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