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  • Things in Your Bag

  • Here are the basic things you need to have in your bag.
  • Firstly, you need to have a mobile phone.
  • Sometimes people, including me, have several mobile phones.
  • I have a modern web-enabled smartphone and an old fashioned mobile phone for work that get a signal quite well, so I am always can be accessible.
  • Secondly, you need to have a wallet.
  • In my country women like to keep a small picture of any dearest person there.
  • I have an image what my niece drew to me.
  • Then, that's important and I always keep in my bag some cosmetics, because I like always looking well.
  • There are a chapstick, a pomade, a mascara in my bag.
  • I never forget about my hand cream.
  • A small mirror is also very important to be found in bag.
  • What have I forgotten?
  • Some hygiene products, a comb..
  • And you absolutely need a headache pill to be ready to everything.
  • Ps. sure, the passport or another document of identification.

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