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hello everyone !
My name is Julie, I was born in Aix en Provence in the Department of the bouches du Rhône in France.
I am 27 years old and I am the proud mother of 3 children.
Jean-Baptiste 4 years, Gabrielle 3 years and Noé 2 years ago.
I am married to Daddy since 28 May 2011 and we live every 5 to Bessèges, a village located in the South of the France.
My passions are photography (I want to make my career), cooking, singing, dancing, reading, travel, animals and nature.

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- I am married to Daddy since 28 May 2011 and we live every 5 to Bessèges, a village located in the South of the France.
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- My passions are photography (I want to make my career), cooking, singing, dancing, reading, travel, animals and nature.
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