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Text from ray114115 - English

  • Why do you want to study abroad?

  • In my country, There is an old saying goes, "Only studying can make poor rich." I want to make me rich, not only in material but mental, so I decided to study abroad, which can makes me become a better person.
  • First of all, study abroad make me independent.
  • For instance, I need to cook by myself, which including prepare food, clean up the kitchen, and wash the dishes.
  • I can not just leave it alone.
  • Thus, I will become more independent.
  • If I study domestic, I can easily get help from other people.
  • moreover, to develop my global view is one of the reasons.
  • Take American for example, if I study in American, I can meet people who grow up in American culture.
  • They difinitely have different thought, behavior and habits with me.
  • That must be a fantasty experience to me.
  • It is one of the reasons why I want to study abroad.
  • Lastly and the most importantly, to develop my professional ability.
  • I had learned electric engineering in my country for seven years.
  • I think it will be wonderful to see how it works in other country, which would give me variety of ideas.
  • That is why I want to study abroad.

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