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With certain, some people might say studying in own country is better, which is more economy.
It is not necessary to study abroad.
That would cost too much money.
Truly, it really cost a lot of money.
But in my opinion, it is an investment.
It will bring me to better life.

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- With certain, some people might say studying in own country is better, which is more economy.
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- It is not necessary to study abroad.
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- That would cost too much money.
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- Truly, it really cost a lot of money.
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- But in my opinion, it is an investment.
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- It will bring me to better life.
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