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A day very tired.
Today I rode bicycle with my friends from my house to the football stadium.
We were in the stadium approximately 30 minutes talking about the school and what we are going to do the next year.
After that we came back to my house and we were swimming about 1 hour, now I am so tired and I will rest a time.

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- A day very tired.
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- Today I rode bicycle with my friends from my house to the football stadium.
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- We were in the stadium approximately 30 minutes talking about the school and what we are going to do the next year.
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- After that we came back to my house and we were swimming about 1 hour, now I am so tired and I will rest a time.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3