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A Trip to Brussel
A month ago i went to Brussel for two days.
I took the bus to go there.
During the second day of my trip i visited Harry Potter The Exhibition.
Then i did some shopping the afternoon.
I brought several things such as clothes, comics, figurines.
This trip was fun, i really enjoyed the city.
I wish to go back to Brussel some day.

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- A Trip to Brussel
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- A month ago i went to Brussel for two days.
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câu 2
- I took the bus to go there.
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câu 3
- During the second day of my trip i visited Harry Potter The Exhibition.
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câu 4
- Then i did some shopping the afternoon.
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câu 5
- I brought several things such as clothes, comics, figurines.
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câu 6
- This trip was fun, i really enjoyed the city.
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câu 7
- I wish to go back to Brussel some day.
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