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  • Please correct my mistakes. Thank you very much.

  • Today I'll tell you about two cats of mine.
  • They were 1 year old, they are brothers, they have the same parents.
  • 3 month ago they lived at my grandparents’ house.
  • Now, they live with me.
  • They are big same as a bottle, they are 30cm, they weigh 0.5kg, one of them is big and the other one is small.
  • They have gray and white fur, with long tail, triangle ears.
  • Their eyes are circular.
  • I see they play with each other so funny.
  • They like playing soccer.
  • Sometimes, they hit each other because of a bone but afterthat, they will eat the bone together.
  • They can eat many things.
  • Their favourite food are fish, bone and mice.
  • After they eat, they sleep.
  • Sometime, I think they are same as the pigs.
  • They sleep all day.
  • They’re dirty because they never take a bath.
  • They both eat the bones that fall down the ground but they don’t feel stomach ache.
  • One strange thing is they jump from a high tree to the ground but their legs don't hurt.
  • They don’t wash their faces but they don’t feel eyesore.
  • They sleep on a bucket but they don’t feel hurt at their bodies.
  • If they are hungry, they keep happy because thay know I will feed for them. I love them. And you?
  • Do you have any pet?
  • Please tell me about it.

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