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What I would like to do the next year
The next year I would like to travel around Colombia, meet people and landscapes, learn new things, and pass the university.
The next year I will study software engeneer, and I wish to learn so much and enjoy that pre-grade.
I would like to have improved very very much my English, and speak with many persons this language.

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- The next year I would like to travel around Colombia, meet people and landscapes, learn new things, and pass the university.
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- The next year I will study software engeneer, and I wish to learn so much and enjoy that pre-grade.
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- I would like to have improved very very much my English, and speak with many persons this language.
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