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my problem with english .
One day , i decieded to start my journey learning 25 language .
Now , i'm a littel bit good in english but still need a lot of work on my italian and german so i 've started a german course hoping it would help me achieve my dream .
You may ask why i write in english although i should start practising my germen .
First , i appreciate your concern but it won't be wise to built a new skill and lose the other , right ?
I'd like you to know , it's a pleasure to know your comments and advice .
Regards Ahmed hany

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- my problem with english .
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- One day , i decieded to start my journey learning 25 language .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- Now , i'm a littel bit good in english but still need a lot of work on my italian and german so i 've started a german course hoping it would help me achieve my dream .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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- You may ask why i write in english although i should start practising my germen .
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- First , i appreciate your concern but it won't be wise to built a new skill and lose the other , right ?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- I'd like you to know , it's a pleasure to know your comments and advice .
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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- Regards Ahmed hany
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6