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Apply for change my position
I am writing to apply for the banksman position I have seen in the warehouse.
I would change my currently position of picker to have more experience in another activity and also take the opportunity to do something different.
I feel that I would be the perfect candidate for the job.
As I plan to stay in the area I will be grateful if I could have this job.
I started working for the company on the 30th November 2015 which is actually close to 10 months.
Thank you for your consideration. Regard.

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- Apply for change my position
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문장 1
- I am writing to apply for the banksman position I have seen in the warehouse.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I would change my currently position of picker to have more experience in another activity and also take the opportunity to do something different.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I feel that I would be the perfect candidate for the job.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- As I plan to stay in the area I will be grateful if I could have this job.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- I started working for the company on the 30th November 2015 which is actually close to 10 months.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- Thank you for your consideration. Regard.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6