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  • Please correct my mistakes. Thank you very much.

  • Maggie Disobeys Maggie had a friend named Kara.
  • Kara’s house was so far from Maggie’s house so when Maggie wanted to go to Kara’s house, her mom went there with her, her mom didn’t want Maggie went there alone.
  • One day, Maggie wanted to go to Kara’s house to play but her mother was busy.
  • Mommy said with Maggie that she could play with Lidsay who was next door.
  • Maggie didn’t want to play with Lidsay so she went to Kara’s house by herself.
  • They played with happyly.
  • Mommy went to Lidsay’s house but she didn’t see Maggie, she was very worry, she ran to Kara’s house.
  • She saw 2 girls who was playing together.
  • While they came home, mommy didn’t say anything.
  • Maggie was sad because she disobeied her mom.
  • Her mom forgave her and kissed goodnight with her.

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