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Hi.
My name is Mario Castello.
I am a Industrial Designer, I would like to learn english, not only writing and reading beacuse I think it is important listening and talking too.
Now, I work with lighting, since many years ago.
I enjoy my job, it is very funny, I can design the way of lighting in various areas like houses, shops and tv studios.
When you need many tips about Lighting design, please tell me, I am going to be waiting for you.
Thanks for reading my text, I hope this one not be boring. Bye, Mario

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- Hi.
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- My name is Mario Castello.
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- I am a Industrial Designer, I would like to learn english, not only writing and reading beacuse I think it is important listening and talking too.
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- Now, I work with lighting, since many years ago.
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문장 5
- I enjoy my job, it is very funny, I can design the way of lighting in various areas like houses, shops and tv studios.
  투표하세요!
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문장 6
- When you need many tips about Lighting design, please tell me, I am going to be waiting for you.
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- Thanks for reading my text, I hope this one not be boring. Bye, Mario
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