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Text from MaoOsorio11 - English

¡Hey!
Hi everybody!
My name is Mao, i like play guitar and listen new music, my English is very, very, very bad ( poor :( ) and i woud like learn more for to travel a United states o Uk and learn more musicians.
thanks for read.

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- ¡Hey!
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- Hi everybody!
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- My name is Mao, i like play guitar and listen new music, my English is very, very, very bad ( poor :( ) and i woud like learn more for to travel a United states o Uk and learn more musicians.
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- thanks for read.
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