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  • Studying abroad

  • Many young people go to university abroad, than in their country.
  • This choice has some advantages but also a lot of cons.
  • If you want to improve your language, studying in country where people use it, will be a great idea.
  • It is the best way to learn language.
  • Sometimes, foreign universities has better education than in homeland.
  • For an example Harvard, Cambridge or Oxford.
  • If you are ambitious you will better go abroad than waste your potential in your country.
  • Moreover, you may have more chance to find your dream job after finish foreign university.
  • Many of polish job providers rather employing people who studied abroad.
  • Although this is not mean that studies in other country has only benefits.
  • Hovewer, another system of education may give you some problem.
  • You will don't accomodate quickly.
  • Therefore you may have problems with communication therefore with some things in everyday day, what about official business.
  • Secondly, you will be far from home, from family, friends.
  • It means that you may be lonely even if you quickly made new friends it may not be the same.
  • Nobody can help you.
  • Finally one of your problems may be with money.
  • Studies are often expensive, more than in native country.
  • As everything, this problem has it good and bad sides.For me, studies abroad will be very interesting and may be a good adventure but I don't think that I will go through it.

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