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  • Study about "how to make the good meeting"

  • Today I attended into a small course about holding project's decision meeting.
  • We were learned that 4 important points have to remember: 1. making the meeting's goal need to achieve. 2.
  • Sharing project information. 3. Discussing. 4.
  • Find out the decision.
  • We were played a game to apply 4 above points.
  • We have 10 people, split into 2 teams.
  • With each team, my teacher gives a paper with difference information to each member.
  • We have to read in 2 minutes, my paper has many many text, but basis information is: we are on the plane traveling to America in our holiday, I'm sleeping and I am woke up by noise.
  • - My teacher said: ok, time out to reading, let's meeting.
  • My group captain started saying: our plan have serious problem, it's going to fall.
  • We will fall on a desert, we will parachute jump to exit, we (our team) need to choose 5 things in list have 10 things.After discussing (in 8 minutes) we given 5 things: water, map, compass, light clothes and a book about animal and plant can eat on desert.
  • My teacher saw our list things and said: seeing to those things, I think you want to move to nearest village, but it can not help you survive.
  • My teacher start asking.
  • - My teacher: Did you choose to go to nearest village or stay there and wait rescue?
  • - We: no, we didn't discuss about that.
  • - My teacher: You just choose 5 things? - We: yes.
  • - My teacher: Do you know that nearest village far from there about 100km?
  • - We: No, we didn't know.
  • - My teacher: This information is in one of your paper.
  • - We: oh, really?
  • - My teacher: Yes, so you only choose staying there and wait rescue.
  • The most important thing you have to choosing is the make-up mirror. - We: oh! ..............
  • After above game, we realized that we lacked 2 important step (1. making the meeting's goal need to achieve and 2.
  • Sharing project information.) The game was exciting.

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