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My dream
When I was younger I always dreamed of become a one of the most famous singer in the world.
But my parents don't able to my dream.They always say "First you must learn a lot".
It was so hard but I never gave up.
When I was older and I started deciding how I live my life I competed in a singing competition.
Succeedfully I won.
I always wins every day because I don't give up.
Fulfill your dreams!

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- When I was younger I always dreamed of become a one of the most famous singer in the world.
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- But my parents don't able to my dream.They always say "First you must learn a lot".
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- It was so hard but I never gave up.
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- When I was older and I started deciding how I live my life I competed in a singing competition.
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- Succeedfully I won.
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- I always wins every day because I don't give up.
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- Fulfill your dreams!
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