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Architecture
I am a member of an association which aims at emphasize a historical monument.
It is the Coucy castle, in Picardy.
That is where I discovered the job of architect of the heritage.
Moreover, I have traveled in different countries since I was a child.
I therefore had the opportunity to see quite a lot of different architectural styles.
For instance, in Morocco, some houses are build with clay.
That is obviously very different from our Western houses!
That is for these two reasons that my mood to integrate an architecture school really showed itself.

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- Architecture
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- I am a member of an association which aims at emphasize a historical monument.
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句子 2
- It is the Coucy castle, in Picardy.
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句子 3
- That is where I discovered the job of architect of the heritage.
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句子 4
- Moreover, I have traveled in different countries since I was a child.
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句子 5
- I therefore had the opportunity to see quite a lot of different architectural styles.
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- For instance, in Morocco, some houses are build with clay.
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- That is obviously very different from our Western houses!
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句子 8
- That is for these two reasons that my mood to integrate an architecture school really showed itself.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8