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Happy Birthday
Hello, Since the England, I wish you a happy birthday.
I hope you would celebrate it very well !!
For me, all is good.
I learn the English spoken and to listening as well.
Kisses to you and all the family.

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- Happy Birthday
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句子 1
- Hello, Since the England, I wish you a happy birthday.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I hope you would celebrate it very well !!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- For me, all is good.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I learn the English spoken and to listening as well.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Kisses to you and all the family.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5