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This is my firs time in this plataform, I´m from Mexico city and a´ll like to learn english.
My dream is go to Australia to live and work, but, I don´t have money for english lessons, actuality I´m studing the University and work on a restaurant every day.

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- This is my firs time in this plataform, I´m from Mexico city and a´ll like to learn english.
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- My dream is go to Australia to live and work, but, I don´t have money for english lessons, actuality I´m studing the University and work on a restaurant every day.
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