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  • When I was rocker .

  • Since I was child I like the strong sounds , distorted guitars , wonderful solos like Vanhelen, Satriani, Vai with their melodic sound , these artist to make me became to passionate for this culture .
  • But any change when I could listen a musician like coltrane, miles Davis and I knew that this music I loved it , now my days are full to jazz music.

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    • Since I was child I like the strong sounds , distorted guitars , wonderful solos like Vanhelen, Satriani, Vai with their melodic sound , these artist to make me became to passionate for this culture .
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    • But any change when I could listen a musician like coltrane, miles Davis and I knew that this music I loved it , now my days are full to jazz music.
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