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Hello
My name is Daniela, I am from Colombia and I am 21 years old.
I want to learn english because I go the next year to usa, I will study and working

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- Hello
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句子 1
- My name is Daniela, I am from Colombia and I am 21 years old.
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- I want to learn english because I go the next year to usa, I will study and working
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2