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  • Rampanted pestilence in 17th century.Church relized that is jewish gulits and 12000 jewish torched in Bavaria and Estrasburg,the rest of people killed with pestilence.
  • Saurgery was forbade in end of 16th century,pop though parts of body willnot be able to find themselvse in doomsday.Thousand persons died by this pop's dicision,even part of bodys will find themselvse in doomsday.
  • ln 17th century expressed tuched bones one saint caused healing in Felorance،one biologist hit-or-miss found out that is sheep's bones.But that bones healed.
  • Humans were borned unlettered,not foolish;They will be foolish by wrong education!
  • The bigest enemy of happiness for humans is unresonable defense of wrong opinions (((thank for your correction)))

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    • Rampanted pestilence in 17th century.Church relized that is jewish gulits and 12000 jewish torched in Bavaria and Estrasburg,the rest of people killed with pestilence.
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    • Saurgery was forbade in end of 16th century,pop though parts of body willnot be able to find themselvse in doomsday.Thousand persons died by this pop's dicision,even part of bodys will find themselvse in doomsday.
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    • ln 17th century expressed tuched bones one saint caused healing in Felorance،one biologist hit-or-miss found out that is sheep's bones.But that bones healed.
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    • The bigest enemy of happiness for humans is unresonable defense of wrong opinions (((thank for your correction)))
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5