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Văn bản từ FabianJesus - English

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  • Hi everyone, this is my first text, and without use google traslation!. awesome, haha.
  • well, I Know my english is no so good, but I'm trying to practice more often, because I love to learn new things.
  • I frecuently, read a lot of books in english, but are not common books, are programming books, the language of the computers, it's interesting in fact, but I'd like to know more about other somethings too. like science, sports, Music, I love this last.
  • The language of the Music, is beautiful and expresive and I love that. well I think, the languages is very important, no only for to find a new job or travel to somewhere.
  • The language is very important, because it allows to know new knowledge,new experiences, new connections with other people like you and like me, and in fact I think this page is not just simple, usefull, for me this page is awesome.
  • Thanks for read this in your free time, feel free to contact me.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • well, I Know my english is no so good, but I'm trying to practice more often, because I love to learn new things.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • I frecuently, read a lot of books in english, but are not common books, are programming books, the language of the computers, it's interesting in fact, but I'd like to know more about other somethings too. like science, sports, Music, I love this last.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • The language of the Music, is beautiful and expresive and I love that. well I think, the languages is very important, no only for to find a new job or travel to somewhere.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • The language is very important, because it allows to know new knowledge,new experiences, new connections with other people like you and like me, and in fact I think this page is not just simple, usefull, for me this page is awesome.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6