Pataisymai

Text from melanie_vi - English

  • My best friend.

  • Name's my best friend is Patricia and I'm going to talk about her personality.
  • She's a fun person who is ready to help you at any time if you need her help for something.
  • For example, she always helped me when I didn't understand something in math or chemistry, she stayed with me in recess trying to make me undertand all these things and that was a thing I valued about her persanality.
  • She always stayed when I really needed her.
  • On the other hand, she's the funniest person I've never seen because she made me laughed all the time with her ideas about different issues.
  • However, she's a inocent person too because you can kid her a lot.
  • For example I remember that in her fifteenth birthday she asked me for her present and a friend and I told her that her present was going to be a owl because her present, which was a T-shirt, had a owl in the middle.
  • We were joking about but she really thought we were going to give her a real owl.
  • Finally, I'd like to say that althought she's too innocent, she has a great heart too, and I respect and admire her for that and I expect she really achieve her dreams.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • For example, she always helped me when I didn't understand something in math or chemistry, she stayed with me in recess trying to make me undertand all these things and that was a thing I valued about her persanality.
      Balsuok dabar!
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    • On the other hand, she's the funniest person I've never seen because she made me laughed all the time with her ideas about different issues.
      Balsuok dabar!
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    • For example I remember that in her fifteenth birthday she asked me for her present and a friend and I told her that her present was going to be a owl because her present, which was a T-shirt, had a owl in the middle.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
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    • Finally, I'd like to say that althought she's too innocent, she has a great heart too, and I respect and admire her for that and I expect she really achieve her dreams.
      Balsuok dabar!
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