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Text from JuanManuel123 - English

  • My first article

  • Well, finally i decide learn English...
  • for this reason i need practice my skills in this language, the first step for me is see a lot of videos about some things very interesting for me, for example the soccer games or the second world War or maybe about animals and nature.
  • The last week i was watching the shark week in national geographic channel, during the video i feel a little nervous because the sharks are very dangerous when the people is in his territory.

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    • for this reason i need practice my skills in this language, the first step for me is see a lot of videos about some things very interesting for me, for example the soccer games or the second world War or maybe about animals and nature.
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    • The last week i was watching the shark week in national geographic channel, during the video i feel a little nervous because the sharks are very dangerous when the people is in his territory.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3