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Some things that I saw after working day
- I saw a man who slept well on pavement of a busy street.
Beside his bicycle was locked with a tree.
It's a very old bicycle, carried scrap.
I guess the that the man was so tired after hard working day.
- I saw two construction workers rode on a old motobike.
They gone, talked and laughed out loud while I (a office staff) felt so tired after working.
- I saw 2 children brought together after school time.
Long time I have no happy moments like that with my friends.

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- Some things that I saw after working day
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- - I saw a man who slept well on pavement of a busy street.
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- Beside his bicycle was locked with a tree.
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- It's a very old bicycle, carried scrap.
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- I guess the that the man was so tired after hard working day.
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- - I saw two construction workers rode on a old motobike.
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- They gone, talked and laughed out loud while I (a office staff) felt so tired after working.
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- - I saw 2 children brought together after school time.
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- Long time I have no happy moments like that with my friends.
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