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Text from victorkenny - English

  • My career

  • In my career choice can influence a lot of things , the working market , the salary and even if all these things are well maybe I won't like that job because , for example , I don't like traveling a lot .
  • I chose this career because I like the video games however my parents and my aunt think that it isn't a good choice .
  • I like math , chemistry and physics and I want to work in video game development because it makes me happy and when I play video games I forget my problems and I escape from reality .

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 1
    • In my career choice can influence a lot of things , the working market , the salary and even if all these things are well maybe I won't like that job because , for example , I don't like traveling a lot .
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  • Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3
    • I like math , chemistry and physics and I want to work in video game development because it makes me happy and when I play video games I forget my problems and I escape from reality .
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