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I want to cry,and want to come back to China
Yesterday,i take the ariplanefrom hongkong to beijing,and then take it again fron bejing to tokyo.
when i arrive at tokyo,its more than 9:00pm in japan.
and then we take the undergrand to go to the hotel to sleep one night.
at 6:45 am the chinese teacher bring me and my classmate to go to take the underground. nearly 9:00am , we two person to go to take the bus to go to nagano.
about 3:00pm,we arrive here.
at this time, no food , no water,we haven't time to buy it, the teacher didn't wait us.
and i haven't the change to buy some drinks from the machine.
i don't know i can insist to do it or not. i think maybe i will choose come back to china so fast.
i don't know````

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- I want to cry,and want to come back to China
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- Yesterday,i take the ariplanefrom hongkong to beijing,and then take it again fron bejing to tokyo.
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- when i arrive at tokyo,its more than 9:00pm in japan.
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- and then we take the undergrand to go to the hotel to sleep one night.
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- at 6:45 am the chinese teacher bring me and my classmate to go to take the underground. nearly 9:00am , we two person to go to take the bus to go to nagano.
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- about 3:00pm,we arrive here.
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- at this time, no food , no water,we haven't time to buy it, the teacher didn't wait us.
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- and i haven't the change to buy some drinks from the machine.
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- i don't know i can insist to do it or not. i think maybe i will choose come back to china so fast.
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- i don't know````
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