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Hi, I'm preparing an oral for my final exam in english.

It will be a dialogue with two other girls, I've written only my sentences, so in order to separate each of my riposte, I'll put a / so that you can have a better understanding.

PS : "city" is for the name of the city I'm talking about, I didn't want to put the real name.

:) Thank you for everything guys :) Hello / Hello Vittoria, it’s me Sharon.

Councillor of « city », how are you ?

/ I’m okay thanks.

Do you know that « city » has just been allocated £1 million lottery grant ?

/ Yeah I tell you.

I’d like us to talk about it together.

Could we fix a time to meet ? / Definitely.

Shall we say 11 a.m?

/ Wait, is Lili available right now ?

I’d like to invite her.

/ Thank you! Hello, Lili ?

/ It’s me, Saron how you do’ ?

/ I call you because £1 million lottery grant has been allocated to « city ».

We’re going to meet with Vittoria on Thursday at 11 am, can you make it ?

/ Sounds good to me.

I inform Vittoria of the change.

See you on Thursday.

/ Thanks for coming at such notice.

Last week I announced you that Caerphilly has been allocated such a big amount of money.

As you can see, there is only one main item to discuss : what can we do for the town with £1 million ?

I’d like to hear your views on this ?

/ Yeah Lili's right… / Humm yeah, that’s not exactly what I was thinking about but as you’re speaking about history.

/ I have thought about an historical project, which will help the inhabitants to remember their history and at the same time to increase the tourism ; because I think these are two important points. / Sure.

The idea is to build a monument, something really big, something enormous.

It will be like a musuem recounting « city »’s story.

Whether it be historical, artistical, political every important moment of « city » has to be in this place.

/ More precisely, a wing of the castle will be reserved for the « city’s » cheese, its history, a liitle cheesemaking room, and a place to buy the cheese, and other for the biggest personalities of « city », pictures of the celebration of the twinning etc. / « city’s » Castle could be the solution (right) !

You have said it was of ruin.

Let’s destroy it ! What’s wrong ?

I’m convinced it needs to be refreshed.

We destroy it so that I have the place to build my museum and we could even do your garden.

It is such an excellent idea.

Furthermore, « city’s » castle is perfect for this project, it is very big and people loves to have a look around.

/ And as far as I’m concerned, I’m sure they would love to be able to go there for a stroll when the sun shines. Great !

I love the idea.

Shall we call it a day ?

Okey, I’ll sum up the main points and send you a mail first thing this afternoon. Alright !?