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Introduce
Hello everyone , everyday , you will be learned more about the knowledge, but it's never full.
With me , I improve my english everyday and I think that the most way is ofter pratice speak , write , listen .
And you don't focus grammar because it make you worry and you won't develop .
I believe that I can't speak english very well with anybody , so who want ro learn vietnamese language can add friends with me. Dear.

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- Introduce
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문장 1
- Hello everyone , everyday , you will be learned more about the knowledge, but it's never full.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- With me , I improve my english everyday and I think that the most way is ofter pratice speak , write , listen .
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- And you don't focus grammar because it make you worry and you won't develop .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I believe that I can't speak english very well with anybody , so who want ro learn vietnamese language can add friends with me. Dear.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4