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從Arifinn4來的文本 - English

  • How Businessman Thinking

  • This is not a tips a guide to be a businessman.
  • I write this text because I'm curious about people that doing business.
  • Why I'm curious?
  • Because they can saving money sen by sen until it become a lot of money.
  • They can manage their mind to not use the money that their saved.
  • I'm type of the person that can't do that.
  • It so hard to manage money if that money is in my wallet.
  • Because everytime I see it, I fell like I still have money.
  • So it doesn't matter if I spent it.
  • I really want to know how they manage their mind.
  • Because my biggest problem is my mind.

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