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  • When I went to a gym for the first time I felt shy because I didn't know how the equipment worked, so I exercised too much my back.
  • I felt as though everybody was looking and laughing at me.
  • But then I met a really good instructor who taught me how to exercise more effectively.
  • Because of lack of time, I don't go to the gym now, but if I see a person who need a help to explain something new I always try to help, because I remember myself when I was in a similar situation.
  • In the future, I'd like to have two children because I know from my own experience that an only child can feel like the center of the universe and be lonely at the same time.
  • I think family is the most important thing in life as you can trust your kin in everything.
  • I think children from a large family are more emphatic, caring and sociable since they must share things and always must communicate with each other and resolve their conflicts.
  • The last time I was really delighted, to tell the truth, I was over the moon when I knew that my best friend had been engaged.
  • I'll never forget her wedding where I was a bridesmaid, sure.
  • I hope that my future wedding will be so happy as it.

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    • When I went to a gym for the first time I felt shy because I didn't know how the equipment worked, so I exercised too much my back.
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    • Because of lack of time, I don't go to the gym now, but if I see a person who need a help to explain something new I always try to help, because I remember myself when I was in a similar situation.
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    • In the future, I'd like to have two children because I know from my own experience that an only child can feel like the center of the universe and be lonely at the same time.
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    • I think children from a large family are more emphatic, caring and sociable since they must share things and always must communicate with each other and resolve their conflicts.
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    • The last time I was really delighted, to tell the truth, I was over the moon when I knew that my best friend had been engaged.
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