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  • The place where I want to go now

  • I want to describe place where I want to go now.
  • It is my hometown names Orenburg.
  • I have been live there for 9 years.
  • And now, when I studying at Moscow University, I miss my home very much.
  • Orenburg is a small town with simple architecture and really beautiful nature.
  • Every summer the streets decorates with huge amount of alive flowers.
  • The town becomes fantastic!
  • It looks like the fairy-tale picture.
  • But the most wonderful time in Orenburg is winter.
  • In this time of year all my town covered by huge layer of snow and you can see Christmas Tree everywhere! oooh....
  • I really homeseak.

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