Korjaukset

Text from Oummey - English

  • My summer job experience

  • In October last year, I found a job in a summer camp of an indian muslim communitty.
  • The employer is my uncle's friend, when he told him about the program of summer camp, this one thought that I certainly will interested, so he signed me up on their recruitment website.
  • My role in that summer camp was to take cae of small children who are 6 (six) to 12 (twelve) years old, for one month in India.
  • This exprerience now is looking very helpful for me, because in my future I would like to be a schoolteacher.
  • So I consider that my uncle had a brilliant idea.
  • This summer camp is organized every year by the same indian muslim community since 2010.
  • Now, it became a kind of company because the trip is pays,and the number of children who join and people who work increases every year.
  • This company prefer to hire yougsters because the employers think that young people are more adapted to do energetic and speed activities, like running after children, screaming/shouting, etc...
  • I got a little bit highest job, because I was in charge of organizing week-end's activities, to choose who's going to hold each group, to sum-up : I led members of staff.
  • But my activites were never the same.
  • I could form groups which had to go to mosque, then served foods, I could also take children to visit many places.
  • And every Saturday, Iit was my turn to take them to cinema, amusement parcs, eat local foods, etc...
  • Every friday night, I met each staff for enntertaining pla.
  • We've got two hundred fiveteen children, including them, there were a grant majority of those who are underr 10 years old.

AUTA KORJAAMAAN JOKAINEN LAUSE! - English

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    • The employer is my uncle's friend, when he told him about the program of summer camp, this one thought that I certainly will interested, so he signed me up on their recruitment website.
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    • My role in that summer camp was to take cae of small children who are 6 (six) to 12 (twelve) years old, for one month in India.
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    • This exprerience now is looking very helpful for me, because in my future I would like to be a schoolteacher.
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    • Now, it became a kind of company because the trip is pays,and the number of children who join and people who work increases every year.
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    • This company prefer to hire yougsters because the employers think that young people are more adapted to do energetic and speed activities, like running after children, screaming/shouting, etc...
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    • I got a little bit highest job, because I was in charge of organizing week-end's activities, to choose who's going to hold each group, to sum-up : I led members of staff.
      Äänestä nyt!
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    • I could form groups which had to go to mosque, then served foods, I could also take children to visit many places.
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    • We've got two hundred fiveteen children, including them, there were a grant majority of those who are underr 10 years old.
      Äänestä nyt!
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