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  • Favourite piece of writing

  • I prefer poem writing amoung all type of writing, because poem has this beautiful way to show feelings thanks to stylistc devices, and lyrical words that we use.
  • It permit us to be out of the ordinary, 'cause simple sentence like "I have feelings for you" or "I love you" is not allowed.
  • It's like a game words, in which the reader need to guess what are the understatements.
  • It can deliver us of barriers at speaking, in which in front of someone, sometimes we couldn't able to use proper words at the right moment when we are very emotioned.
  • So, poem help us to say what is hided in darkest depth of our soul, Often, it express more than what we want to say thanks to the power of words.

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    • I prefer poem writing amoung all type of writing, because poem has this beautiful way to show feelings thanks to stylistc devices, and lyrical words that we use.
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    • It permit us to be out of the ordinary, 'cause simple sentence like "I have feelings for you" or "I love you" is not allowed.
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    • It can deliver us of barriers at speaking, in which in front of someone, sometimes we couldn't able to use proper words at the right moment when we are very emotioned.
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    • So, poem help us to say what is hided in darkest depth of our soul, Often, it express more than what we want to say thanks to the power of words.
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