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  • THERE IS ONE CURE FOR OBESITY AND ONE ONLY: EAT LESS.
  • IT'S THAT OR THE FATNESS EPIDEMIC WILL KILL MORE THAN SPANISH FLU Scientists and politicians believe in the mistaken fact that food suppliers claim : obesity is due to a lack of excercices.
  • The real cause is eating too many calories by eating high-sugar or high-carbohydrate diet, but this kind of food yield profit.
  • Nevertheless, fat can prevent us from eating too much.
  • On the contrary, carbohydrates and sugar give the sensation that the stomach did not had a full meal, which lead to eat more.
  • A healthy meal is not tasty enough, that's why food industries add a lot of sugar.
  • Genetic, psychological and metabolic factors are not the causes of obesity, however all bodies react differently to a same diet.
  • Even a lot of excercices can not burn a lot of calories.
  • There are few ways to avoid the deadly consequences of obesity : tiny portions and healthy food.
  • At least, if healthy food is too expensive to be bought, the bad food should be reduced.
  • Dietitians and psychiatrists will help people to learn thow to eat and cook proprely.
  • A simple obesity strategy should be planned saying that obesity could be deadful but is free to cure.

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