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Have you planned your holiday? What kind of holiday your prefer
Hi Hugh, It was so nice from hear you.
Fistly, I prefer spend my holidays on the beach.
In fact, I have already booked in the Barcelo Hotel from June tenth to fiveteenth.
This beach is in Mazagon,Huelva.
Secondly, I prefer the beach because I can meet many people.
Also I can relax with my family and eat meditarrean food like fried fish or delicious meat.
My sons can go to the party, that is fantastic and my wife and me can go for a walk quietly.
We love sunbathe so We will get a tan!
I hope you all have a great weekend.

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- Have you planned your holiday? What kind of holiday your prefer
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- Hi Hugh, It was so nice from hear you.
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- Fistly, I prefer spend my holidays on the beach.
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- In fact, I have already booked in the Barcelo Hotel from June tenth to fiveteenth.
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- This beach is in Mazagon,Huelva.
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- Secondly, I prefer the beach because I can meet many people.
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- Also I can relax with my family and eat meditarrean food like fried fish or delicious meat.
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- My sons can go to the party, that is fantastic and my wife and me can go for a walk quietly.
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- We love sunbathe so We will get a tan!
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- I hope you all have a great weekend.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9