Corrections

Text from Symmons - English

  • Moving house

  • I announced this morning to April that I was going to move by the end of the month and I'll keep my folding-bike because I might use it to get work on time because where I'm gonna live is farther than her house.
  • Obviously she got pissed off and said I can't because she wanted me to pay a whole month notice before leaving.
  • So I refused because it's illegal and she kicked me out and threw my stuff on the floor in the front of my door.
  • I was contacted by another lady who owns a house as well so I asked her for a viewing as soon as possible.
  • I went to her and saw the house, asked for arrangement because I was going to be homeless tonight and she was okay to let me sleep on the sofa until one of the two room will be available.
  • She had some bad experience with other people and wouldn't trust me, I transferred the money straight away on her bank account and had my first night in the house.
  • We discussed a lot, she is really nice and agree to let me cook and the kitchen.
  • So I transferred all my stuff in the afternoon in only two tours, I was full of bags and was very heavy.
  • I felt really upset and bad it was a nightmare.
  • The 3 guys who normally should come in the house came and left before Louisa comes back to get some sandwiches but they never come back so I had the bigger room for myself.

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  • Sentence 1
    • I announced this morning to April that I was going to move by the end of the month and I'll keep my folding-bike because I might use it to get work on time because where I'm gonna live is farther than her house.
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  • Sentence 5
    • I went to her and saw the house, asked for arrangement because I was going to be homeless tonight and she was okay to let me sleep on the sofa until one of the two room will be available.
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  • Sentence 6
    • She had some bad experience with other people and wouldn't trust me, I transferred the money straight away on her bank account and had my first night in the house.
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    • The 3 guys who normally should come in the house came and left before Louisa comes back to get some sandwiches but they never come back so I had the bigger room for myself.
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