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Text from MarieSK - English

  • My invention

  • At the time of the novel, teenagers are mad about the Bubble Sound.
  • That's a kind of? air bubble which allows to listen music individually, without earphones.
  • It looks like a halo all around the person whom use it, a little blurred, without sharp outline and bluish to recognize those who use it.
  • Gone is tangled wire with it !
  • It's wireless but connected to your phone, you just have to choose the music.
  • You can adjust the sound but the device manage it automatically, according to the environment where you are.
  • It never break throught 70 decibels, which is the limit to not damage the eardrums.
  • That's a huge advantage in comparison with the classicals earphones who attack the eardrums seeing as the sound reach directly the ear.
  • You are like in your own world, but you can all the same hear slighty the noise of the street and what happend around you.
  • It would be very dangerous otherwise, especially in the street with the cars and all the rest.
  • And the sound lower if someone is talking to you.
  • The contrary/opposite would be pretty bad manners.
  • The people outside of the bubble are not bothered because they don't hear anything.
  • You can invite anybody in your bubble and it's very simple : you just held out your hand to the person, then he can come in.
  • No complicated code like WiFi system to join it, or the irritating earphones which fall out of your ear.
  • And to leave it, he just move away from you.
  • He need you to come in, but can come out by himself.
  • When you are fed up, just stop the music and the Bubble disappear.

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