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Text from misangocle08022004 - English

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  • "Who left this pile of books on the floor?" - Mommy asked.
  • Emily said: " I don't know." About 5 minutes later, Mommy asked: " Who left the crayons and coloring book in the middle of the floor?" Emily answered: " I don't know." and played with her doll house.
  • A few minutes later, Mommy asked: " Who forgot to put the doll house and dolls back in the closet?" Emily pulled up the hat and said: "I don't know." Mommy wondered: "I wonder who left the dress-up clothes scattered here on the floor?" Emily put another pieces in the puzzle before she said: "I don't know." " Oh dear, the puzzle pieces are still all over the floor.
  • Who do you think forgot to put them back in the box?" Mommy asked softly.
  • Emily said: "I don't know." Mommy looked around at all the messes and said: "This 'I don't know' is a pretty messy person, isn't she." But, Emily didn't say any words.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
    • Emily said: " I don't know." About 5 minutes later, Mommy asked: " Who left the crayons and coloring book in the middle of the floor?" Emily answered: " I don't know." and played with her doll house.
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  • Sentence 3
    • A few minutes later, Mommy asked: " Who forgot to put the doll house and dolls back in the closet?" Emily pulled up the hat and said: "I don't know." Mommy wondered: "I wonder who left the dress-up clothes scattered here on the floor?" Emily put another pieces in the puzzle before she said: "I don't know." " Oh dear, the puzzle pieces are still all over the floor.
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  • Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • Emily said: "I don't know." Mommy looked around at all the messes and said: "This 'I don't know' is a pretty messy person, isn't she." But, Emily didn't say any words.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5