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  • Please correct the story for me. Thank you so much.

  • Cori prepared to go to bed.
  • She was ready for her good-night prayer.
  • She finished the prayer and mommy gave her a big huge.
  • She hugged her teddy bear and her favorite stuffed dolphin.
  • Cori closed her eyes.
  • Suddenly, a crash of thunder made her jump right out of bed.
  • Lightning flashed in the sky like cameras snapping a thousand pictures.
  • Cori was afraid.
  • She saw many shadows of the trees same as the monsters.
  • She cried: " Mommy, mommy! I'm scared.
  • " Mommy hugged her and said: "It's OK.
  • There's nothing to be scared of.
  • Storms like this show us how much power God has." Cori whispered: "Can I sleep in your room?" "Sure." Mommy answered.
  • Cori slept in the sleeping bag next to mommy's bed.

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