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Please correct the story for me. Thank you so much.
The house was dirty.
Mommy need to tidy the house.
Samantha raise her hand and calling: "I can help you, Mommy." But Mommy ignored her.
Mommy need to dust the furniture.
Samantha shouted: "I'll do that!
I will do that." But Mommy wrote words in the dust and pretended not to hear.
Samantha stood on the chair and looked at her mommy's eyes and said: " Mommy, I can help you more and more.
I'll become your great helper." Samantha said that makes she happy and she'll become the best helper.

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- Please correct the story for me. Thank you so much.
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Sentence 1
- The house was dirty.
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Sentence 2
- Mommy need to tidy the house.
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Sentence 3
- Samantha raise her hand and calling: "I can help you, Mommy." But Mommy ignored her.
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Sentence 4
- Mommy need to dust the furniture.
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Sentence 5
- Samantha shouted: "I'll do that!
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Sentence 6
- I will do that." But Mommy wrote words in the dust and pretended not to hear.
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Sentence 7
- Samantha stood on the chair and looked at her mommy's eyes and said: " Mommy, I can help you more and more.
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Sentence 8
- I'll become your great helper." Samantha said that makes she happy and she'll become the best helper.
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