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Text from Tatiana1680 - English

  • what is tourism?

  • Tourism is travels, adventures and learn something new.
  • When you are traveling, you meet with people, countries and traditions different nations.
  • Can say, that tourism is one of the best ways to spend a holiday.
  • Nowadays there are many means of travelling around the world and they are very comfortable.
  • The tourism sphere is developing everyday.
  • I believe that is complicated sphere because it has many sectors, which have different jobs to offer.
  • It is accommodation sphere, public catering, travel companies, transport sphere, school training, information sphere, management of tourism sphere and the creation and sale of tourist services.
  • You have a wide choice of work: from the manager of the hotel and ending with a tour operator.
  • For a work in tourism, you need some skills.
  • In my opinion, you need IT – skills to do marketing research and find some information.
  • Also, you must be able to count, read and write.
  • Moreover, for work in any sector you talk your clients into to buy your offers.
  • You need to be patient, polite and restrained.
  • But the most important thing is that you must be a committed your work and be initiative.
  • Tourism for me is an interesting sphere, where I can realize myself.
  • Today I have some skills for work in tourism: IT – skills, be literate and numerate and accurate.
  • I want to be a tour operator marketing, because this job suits me.
  • I think that I have necessary skills, for example, IP – skills.
  • This job is hard.
  • Sometimes, I have a real appetite for hard work.

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