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  • Nowadays, Some second languages are becoming less and less useful .
  • I thoroughly agree with this situation and the reason is that I think it will inevitably disappear in the future.
  • In people live, people with second languages sometimes have fewer opportunities to use them, it is not necessary for people to use their second language, just using it with their parents or keeping their culture.
  • Firstly, it is not necessary to learn other languages in our life which don't mean our life would become tough, most people who can speak more than one languages that indicate where their family come from, by the situation of people who immigrate from Aisa, whose parent normally move to Australia with their first languages such as Cantonese and Mandarin rather than with English.
  • When children study individually at school, they begin to speak English along growing up, no wonder their family languages would disappear and the obviously reason is less use often, On the other hand, there are responsible for parents to inherit their own language for their kids, English is an international language that learning is a good idea for their children to open the door, for the example, there are about 50% of people who are English speakers in the world, how convenient it is when you can communicate with them for travel or business.
  • It depends on parents who how extent they want to inherit the own languages for kids.
  • In my opinion, parents should take a lead that to inherit their culture for kids including languages, it is not only about how valuable does languages are, it is about how important their own culture is.

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    • In people live, people with second languages sometimes have fewer opportunities to use them, it is not necessary for people to use their second language, just using it with their parents or keeping their culture.
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    • Firstly, it is not necessary to learn other languages in our life which don't mean our life would become tough, most people who can speak more than one languages that indicate where their family come from, by the situation of people who immigrate from Aisa, whose parent normally move to Australia with their first languages such as Cantonese and Mandarin rather than with English.
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  • Sentence 5
    • When children study individually at school, they begin to speak English along growing up, no wonder their family languages would disappear and the obviously reason is less use often, On the other hand, there are responsible for parents to inherit their own language for their kids, English is an international language that learning is a good idea for their children to open the door, for the example, there are about 50% of people who are English speakers in the world, how convenient it is when you can communicate with them for travel or business.
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    • In my opinion, parents should take a lead that to inherit their culture for kids including languages, it is not only about how valuable does languages are, it is about how important their own culture is.
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