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Peru
Peru is a beauty country, with very places awesome.
Some people know about to Peru because Machu Picchu.
But Peru is more, they are beautiful beaches, waterfalls, rivers, the jungle and other tourist attractive.

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句子 1
- Peru is a beauty country, with very places awesome.
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句子 2
- Some people know about to Peru because Machu Picchu.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- But Peru is more, they are beautiful beaches, waterfalls, rivers, the jungle and other tourist attractive.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3