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My experience with english.
My name is Audry, I'm eighteen years old.
I want to learn english because one of my dreams is traveling around the world and is necesary to know another language.
I am studying english since I was thirteen years old, or twelve years old.
I don't remember.
I was studying in an academy of my town, It was good but I was afraid, I was a baby!
A new language, oh God I felt pain and I left that.
I don't know, sometimes I feel insecure about my pronunciation, of course.
Now, I'm studying english again in the University, I study modern languages.
I hope some day speaking english pretty well!
And traveling around the world, that's all.

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- My name is Audry, I'm eighteen years old.
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- I want to learn english because one of my dreams is traveling around the world and is necesary to know another language.
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- I am studying english since I was thirteen years old, or twelve years old.
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- I don't remember.
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문장 5
- I was studying in an academy of my town, It was good but I was afraid, I was a baby!
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- A new language, oh God I felt pain and I left that.
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- I don't know, sometimes I feel insecure about my pronunciation, of course.
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- Now, I'm studying english again in the University, I study modern languages.
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문장 9
- I hope some day speaking english pretty well!
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문장 10
- And traveling around the world, that's all.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10